Second Draft, On The Rise

I have remade the title for "On The Rise". This is an idea for a movie poster, and is still in progress.

TYPE:
I started out with the typeface, Bureau Agency - Bold, then altered it by making it appear on a slant to help portray a rise. I also added dimensionality to the type. It took a very long time to make this title, lots of playing with anchor points and such. I feel that it is a major improvement from last week, what do you think?

DETAIL:
Here are some bigger screenshot's so you can see the details on the type! Another color also!